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How to Revise an Email so that People will Read it

Article Author
David Silverman
Publish Date
July 3, 2009
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"People think that the first draft is the big event and that revision is cleaning up afterward. But the first draft is really setting up the chairs, tables, and cups, and revision isn't cleaning up after the party, it is the party."

"All first drafts are terrible. I don't care if you're Hemingway."

"What comes out unfiltered from anyone's mind is mud."

The first two quotations come from writing professors whose names I've since forgotten (and they were quoting other people whom they'd forgotten). The last one is one I just made up myself. But regardless of the source, the advice is sound: no email should be clicked-to-send without revision.

I've found that for your average email, the number of revisions largely depends on the number of recipients. Here's my experience:

    1 to 5 recipients = 2 to 4 revisions
    5 to 10 recipients = 8 to 12 revisions
    Company-wide or to Executive Committee = 30 to 50 revisions

Even the simplest missive to one person benefits from a couple of extra passes, and if it's going to the management committee, expect everyone to have changes (and changes to those changes).

complet lists

1. Delete redundancies. Say it once. That's enough.  If you're repetitive, the reader will stop reading and start skimming. (Like you probably just did.)

How many times do you do a revision?

Comments

lol....that was funny I did

lol....that was funny I did begin skimming

I try to revise each time i

I try to revise each time i forward or rework to compose into a new e-mail. It seems to me, that each recipient has their own catch phrases, buzz words and speak easy they gleen for, thus creating the illusion that we must revise, revise, revise

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